为什么连接词在SPM英文中如此重要
对比以下两个版本的同一段落:
没有连接词: “Pollution is a serious problem. The government has introduced new laws. Many factories continue to dump waste into rivers.”
有连接词: “Pollution is a serious problem. Although the government has introduced new laws, many factories still continue to dump waste into rivers.”
第二个版本自然流畅,想法之间有逻辑联系。这正是SPM考官在评定连贯性和衔接性时寻找的——这两个标准直接影响你的作文分数档。
连接词的类型及使用时机
1. 添加信息
当你要增加支持或扩展你观点的要点时使用:
| 连接词 | 例句 |
|---|---|
| Furthermore(此外) | Exercise improves health. Furthermore, it boosts mental wellbeing. |
| In addition(另外) | The library offers books. In addition, it provides free Wi-Fi. |
| Moreover(而且) | She is hardworking. Moreover, she always helps others. |
| Not only…but also(不仅…而且) | Not only did she score A, but she also topped the class. |
SPM贴士: “Furthermore”和”Moreover”比”Also”和”And”更正式,在议论文和正式写作中使用效果更好。
2. 表示对比
当提出相反观点或出人意料的结果时使用:
| 连接词 | 例句 |
|---|---|
| However(然而) | The plan seemed perfect. However, problems arose. |
| Although(虽然) | Although he studied hard, he did not pass. |
| Nevertheless(尽管如此) | The weather was terrible. Nevertheless, the event proceeded. |
| Despite(尽管) | Despite the rain, students continued activities. |
| While(而) | While some prefer online learning, others favour classes. |
常见错误: 不要在同一句中同时使用”but”和”however”。
3. 表示因果
| 连接词 | 例句 |
|---|---|
| Therefore(因此) | He didn’t revise. Therefore, he performed poorly. |
| As a result(结果) | The river was polluted. As a result, many fish died. |
| Because / Since(因为) | She excels because she reads widely. |
| Due to(由于) | The match was cancelled due to heavy rain. |
4. 举例
| 连接词 | 例句 |
|---|---|
| For example(例如) | Many students struggle with grammar. For example, subject-verb agreement. |
| Such as(比如) | Activities such as hiking are popular among teenagers. |
5. 表示顺序
- Firstly / Secondly / Finally — 列举论点
- Next / Then / After that — 叙事顺序
- Eventually / In the end — 结束序列
6. 总结
- In conclusion(总之)/ To sum up(总而言之)/ All in all(总的来说)
连接词使用中的常见错误
每句话都以连接词开头
Furthermore… Moreover… In addition… Besides…
这读起来像清单,不像作文。用连接词来连接想法,不要每句话都以它开头。
连接词与逻辑不匹配
错误: She studied hard. However, she scored well.(这暗示努力学习后考得好是意外——其实不是)
正确: She studied hard. As a result, she scored well.
每次都要检查:连接词与句子之间的逻辑关系匹配吗?
标点错误
FANBOYS(for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so): 连接两个独立分句时,在连词前加逗号。
However / Therefore: 前面用句号或分号,后面加逗号。
不同作文类型的连接词速查表
议论文
- 表达观点: I firmly believe, In my opinion
- 支持论点: Furthermore, Moreover
- 反方论点: Some may argue that, It is true that
- 反驳: However, Nevertheless
- 结论: In conclusion, Ultimately
叙事文
- 时间顺序: One morning, Suddenly, Eventually
- 动作描写: Without hesitation, Immediately
- 感悟反思: Looking back, It was then that I realised
报告/正式书信
- 呈现发现: It was found that, According to the survey
- 建议: It is recommended that
- 正式过渡: With regard to, In light of
练习
添加适当的连接词:
- She wanted to join the debate team. _____ she was afraid of public speaking.
- The school organised a campaign. _____, 500 kg of waste was collected.
- _____ being new, she quickly made friends.
参考答案:
- However
- As a result
- Despite
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