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SPM英文作文连接词和过渡词完全指南

连接词能把断断续续的句子变成流畅连贯的段落。掌握各类连接词和过渡词,提升SPM英文作文的连贯性评分。

作者: Teacher Daletha · 7 分钟阅读 · 2024年3月24日
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为什么连接词在SPM英文中如此重要

对比以下两个版本的同一段落:

没有连接词: “Pollution is a serious problem. The government has introduced new laws. Many factories continue to dump waste into rivers.”

有连接词: “Pollution is a serious problem. Although the government has introduced new laws, many factories still continue to dump waste into rivers.”

第二个版本自然流畅,想法之间有逻辑联系。这正是SPM考官在评定连贯性和衔接性时寻找的——这两个标准直接影响你的作文分数档。

连接词的类型及使用时机

1. 添加信息

当你要增加支持或扩展你观点的要点时使用:

连接词例句
Furthermore(此外)Exercise improves health. Furthermore, it boosts mental wellbeing.
In addition(另外)The library offers books. In addition, it provides free Wi-Fi.
Moreover(而且)She is hardworking. Moreover, she always helps others.
Not only…but also(不仅…而且)Not only did she score A, but she also topped the class.

SPM贴士: “Furthermore”和”Moreover”比”Also”和”And”更正式,在议论文和正式写作中使用效果更好。

2. 表示对比

当提出相反观点或出人意料的结果时使用:

连接词例句
However(然而)The plan seemed perfect. However, problems arose.
Although(虽然)Although he studied hard, he did not pass.
Nevertheless(尽管如此)The weather was terrible. Nevertheless, the event proceeded.
Despite(尽管)Despite the rain, students continued activities.
While(而)While some prefer online learning, others favour classes.

常见错误: 不要在同一句中同时使用”but”和”however”。

3. 表示因果

连接词例句
Therefore(因此)He didn’t revise. Therefore, he performed poorly.
As a result(结果)The river was polluted. As a result, many fish died.
Because / Since(因为)She excels because she reads widely.
Due to(由于)The match was cancelled due to heavy rain.

4. 举例

连接词例句
For example(例如)Many students struggle with grammar. For example, subject-verb agreement.
Such as(比如)Activities such as hiking are popular among teenagers.

5. 表示顺序

  • Firstly / Secondly / Finally — 列举论点
  • Next / Then / After that — 叙事顺序
  • Eventually / In the end — 结束序列

6. 总结

  • In conclusion(总之)/ To sum up(总而言之)/ All in all(总的来说)

连接词使用中的常见错误

每句话都以连接词开头

Furthermore… Moreover… In addition… Besides…

这读起来像清单,不像作文。用连接词来连接想法,不要每句话都以它开头。

连接词与逻辑不匹配

错误: She studied hard. However, she scored well.(这暗示努力学习后考得好是意外——其实不是)

正确: She studied hard. As a result, she scored well.

每次都要检查:连接词与句子之间的逻辑关系匹配吗?

标点错误

FANBOYS(for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so): 连接两个独立分句时,在连词前加逗号。

However / Therefore: 前面用句号或分号,后面加逗号。

不同作文类型的连接词速查表

议论文

  • 表达观点: I firmly believe, In my opinion
  • 支持论点: Furthermore, Moreover
  • 反方论点: Some may argue that, It is true that
  • 反驳: However, Nevertheless
  • 结论: In conclusion, Ultimately

叙事文

  • 时间顺序: One morning, Suddenly, Eventually
  • 动作描写: Without hesitation, Immediately
  • 感悟反思: Looking back, It was then that I realised

报告/正式书信

  • 呈现发现: It was found that, According to the survey
  • 建议: It is recommended that
  • 正式过渡: With regard to, In light of

练习

添加适当的连接词:

  1. She wanted to join the debate team. _____ she was afraid of public speaking.
  2. The school organised a campaign. _____, 500 kg of waste was collected.
  3. _____ being new, she quickly made friends.

参考答案:

  1. However
  2. As a result
  3. Despite

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Teacher Daletha
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Teacher Daletha创办SPMEnglish.com.my,帮助马来西亚学生——尤其是华校和国民学校背景的学生——在SPM英文考试中取得更高分数。她用英文和华语将复杂的英文概念分解为清晰实用的步骤,让学生真正理解后再运用。

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